Slowly, I opened it up. To my utmost horror, it was a corpse with bloods stains on a knife that was left by the murder. There was only a body but no heads! How ridiculous! We were trying to calm ourselves down as we were shocked. Very shocked. We noticed a man who was jogging so we ran as fast as a wind towards him to seek help.
After telling him what actually happened, he immediately called the police. The corpse might belong to someone that was murdered a few days ago. No one knows that there was a bulky plastic bag found a the nearby reservoir as it was deserted. No one. Fear gripped my heart. I could not forget the corpse that I saw as it was a horrifying experience. I have never seen a corpse before.
A wail of sirens could be heard. The policemen had came, followed by a ambulance. The paramedics swam to save Tom that had died in the water. They took a long time just to untie the water plants from his leg. He died without having done wrong. I really felt sorry for him and George was holding tightly to his hand, crying profusely. George was very sad as he knew that Tom died as he wanted to save George and I in time. Tom's death had made me extremely sad and it was like an arrow that shot my heart. It was a day of "disappointment" and a hair-rising experience as we had to see two died bodies at a time.
This moment was unforgettable. This experience was like a gold dust and it left an inedible stain in my mind. I could not even let myself forgot about it. Some of the policemen was combing the place and the corpse for clues and the most important thing was the fingerprints left carelessly by the murderer. While some of the policemen was taking sentences made by George and me so that they could gather the clues.
The corpse was taken back by the policemen to do a DNA test. It is done to find out either who was the murderer or the victim. They found some fingerprints too so they used run through the database to find out who actually was the murderer.
Find out who was actually the murderer in the next chapter!!!
Wednesday, June 11, 2008
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1.Eh...how come Tom got bleed and his blood had covered half of the water?
2.Ooo...you turned it to like a "detective" story. Not bad ah.
3. Note that you had grammar errors!! Past tense become present tense.
4. How come George dare to hold Tom's hand? Later Tom suddenly wake up then the two of your heartbeat jumped out of your ribcage. =)
5. When you opened the plastic bag, you left your fingerprints too. Later the detective go and do a DNA test and found out that you are the accomplice of the murderer who help to pack the corpse. Just joking..dun be angry, tabor! =)
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